Overall, I think my essay fit the grade it received. I am content with my grade, as it is my first college essay, and I know there is some room for improvement, especially in the second essay I will be working on soon. The comments have given me insight into what I can improve on and how to make my next essay an “A” level essay, which is always my goal. One of the main skills I need to work on is incorporating more than just one author into each body paragraph. I think this will overall strengthen my argument by adding more perspectives on the issue, as well as improving the structure of my essay. Another skill I need to work on is adding more evidence from the authors. In my essay, I discussed how Waldinger gives scientific evidence of how good relationships improve brain health. To strengthen my argument, I should have included the specific scientific evidence from his study.