Peer Revision – Global
I peer reviewed Matt’s essay: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Kf4fG3XgyHsgZdjgp-xlowKEZMgtozl_PHlRABkBVQA/edit
Framing Statement + Peer Review
I reviewed two essays from my classmates. One essay I read I believe I added some very beneficial comments and that will help my peer progress between drafts. A handful of the comments I added were relating to the Evidence portion. I thought that my peer could use some more perspectives from other authors in order to strengthen their argument and develop their essay further. They were discussing how technology influences the increasing rates of depression in individuals. I gave…
Peer Workshop
Local Revision: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Um0L2sZ4fHQdbWJdYN1fLHI5_W-GQuXCcDUhUtv54RM/edit Global Revision: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1238ZnEEOqiNDhKIDGZVOrUossDfcowzIrWq-nDOSz9g/edit https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hc1ALqAeI2tHTFXtTrznZ7MtCaM_8ydXFYs4ruA0PmY/edit
